Wednesday, June 3, 2009


i always knew I was walking alone
alone on these unknown roads…
I always knew there is no one for me
No one to share success ..tears..
I knew dat ders no hand to lend…
No hand to take me along…
Bt today y m I feelng pain…
Y am I kneeling down..
Y r backs hurtng me..
Y m I waitng for a ray..
To tear dis darkness..
Y m I waitng for a hope..
Wen dey ver never for me…
Y m I waitng for someone to 
Gather pieces I broke into..
Ven I know no one walks vid me..
No one ever was vid me..
Whom m I waitng for…
Its again time to gather pieces…
Nd stick dem again…myself…

6 comments:

  1. dont gather the pieces, just let it be, its like glass. you can stick them together but temporarily.

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  2. Hey!!!
    u really write admirable, touchy n over-sensitive poems ya!!

    n don think as broken pieces!!!
    dis wrld is nt at all entirely fake!!!..
    Time makes all d thing perfect!!
    so wait n try 2 gather ur pieces n luk urself dat u r at d rt place!!

    Keep on goin lk dis!!!
    All D Best!!

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  3. somehow anki seems to leave long comments..... :P

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